THURSDAY
hello dear regulators, 1st time i been able to take a breath in about 2 weeks
hadnt heard from the industry so i figure they werent lining up for bids and
i may have told you already, im doing something new w/rest fr the weary
compacting what had been a lot of whitespace, that made the work look
shallow, now its in dense narrative blocks,, and its working so well i thought
to do it w/the hoodoo book of flowers, and i never heard from from charles
about using his works so 1st i took all the graphics out, then i compacted
the poetry so its still lyical but its dense narrative blocks, i went from 400+
pages to 200, then w/o all that narrative fireworks the Word became more
prominent and i saw repeats, slush, pyschobabble, selfhelppablum,
weaklicks, cliches, so i been extracting all that, making it even leaner
leaving for portgual tomorrow and i wanted this off my plate so i can
concentrate on novel during those plane endurance tests so anyway
longstory short, just finished it, its looking good, will send to ellen
she sending to amistad she say, we will see
im gone, i got so much stuff need doing, all my love
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